?

Log in

No account? Create an account
 
 
12 February 2001 @ 03:43 pm
Adventure Con  
It was May.
There was a full moon.
I sat down on the rock.
He crouched before me,
holding both my hands,
our fingers intertwined.
I took in his face
and saw the relief
fear, pain, and sadness.
He stared into my eyes.
In the instant
before he spoke
I knew without a doubt
in every fiber of my being
we had forever
and nothing else mattered.
 
 
 
Nicoleivory_child on December 25th, 2003 11:47 am (UTC)
"a fiber of my being"

That's the best line... I write poetry alot. Check out my journal. I'll add you as a friend. :) *you write nice*
poptart_penguinpoptart_penguin on December 27th, 2003 10:09 am (UTC)
I noticed you like to write. I was wondering if you would like to join my community, _poetic_dreams_? I just recently created it and need members. Please join!
d'zrak d'zrukpsychedellic on January 16th, 2004 02:47 am (UTC)
that was really beautiful.
twisted ladytwisted_lady on July 25th, 2004 02:36 pm (UTC)
i liked it but found it flat. just like you pounded out these lines with little flow that i'm sure you are capable of